Commons:Photography critiques/October 2016
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Cathedral of Zacatecas
Thank you in advance for any feedback you can provide Regards --Cvmontuy (talk) 00:18, 15 October 2016 (UTC)
- I dabble only slightly in photography, so I wouldn't be able to advise you on technical matters, but I will say that this photo is pretty good and I think it would pass if nominated at COM:Quality images candidates. The focus is good throughout most of the picture, and only in a few places do you have blown out whites. I think one of the bigger challenges you are faced with in photographing this kind of scene is how to avoid blowing out and/or posterizing either the whites or the blacks. There are some black water towers(?) on tops of buildings that look a little posterized. The only really significant area of unsharpness I see is in the near right corner. People have different levels of tolerance for unsharp foregrounds, but you could consider cropping them, or a majority of their area, out. But overall, I find the picture solidly good. -- Ikan Kekek (talk) 08:02, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
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- Cvmontuy I can see several improvements.
- Lets start for the moment that you took the photo, the light was very harsh in moment of the picture, so the shadows are very edge. This could be better.
- White balance, pay attention on white walls, they are not white, they are something close to red. You could balance that.
- The image is one to 0,5 stop darker that I see as good, however you need to manage the highlights, as already mentioned. Your camera could recovery a giant amount of details in the dark areas.
- Why 1/1000s and ISO 500? That choice made the picture very noisy.
- I don't know if they are out of focus, or not sharp, but f/10, if you focus in the middle of this image, not in the infinity, you could maybe have everything in focus. To guarantee focus and sharpness focus stacking could work.
- I made a quick manipulation, see things that I told you: [1]
- -- Rodrigo Tetsuo Argenton m 19:58, 21 October 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot Ikan and Rodrigo, very usefull comments, regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cvmontuy (talk • contribs) 03:02, 25 October 2016 (UTC)